Looks good. But I would call it a line drawing rather than a pencil sketch. Even if you draw it with a pen it wouldn’t be much different.
When I have to look at a pencil sketch, I would expect to see something unique about drawing with pencil. Like getting different shades based on how much pressure you apply or even the rating of the pencil (HB .etc) to depict the bright and dark parts which distinguishes the object from a flat replica.
To give a specific example, the color of the hair is uniform throughout. no variation is shown in the shade which distinguishes a plane sheet from a three dimensional object.
Even the flower looks like it is made of flat paper unless shades are used to distinguish the curves.
I am not an artist, but this much I am sure make sense. Hope it helps in your next picture
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Looks good. But I would call it a line drawing rather than a pencil sketch. Even if you draw it with a pen it wouldn’t be much different.
When I have to look at a pencil sketch, I would expect to see something unique about drawing with pencil. Like getting different shades based on how much pressure you apply or even the rating of the pencil (HB .etc) to depict the bright and dark parts which distinguishes the object from a flat replica.
To give a specific example, the color of the hair is uniform throughout. no variation is shown in the shade which distinguishes a plane sheet from a three dimensional object.
Even the flower looks like it is made of flat paper unless shades are used to distinguish the curves.
I am not an artist, but this much I am sure make sense. Hope it helps in your next picture